I have to admit I like that magic graph very much XD
Further on the plot. It was something different from what I had expected. Though I do think it is a very original idea. I have never seen something like this before.
I do think it holds a lot of potential, however it is not what I am in the mood for right now. I have several high detailed and intense roleplays going on already, so I was searching for a more Greek Gods rp than this.
Still I like the idea so much I will keep around to see if anyone else gets interested and I might actually join when it gets set up, but I don't promise anything.
As for tips on improvement. I would say try to make your explanation more like one story and not all lose and different lines. It gets the idea across, but it is a bit... static to read. So try to make it a more flowing story/explanation. Again I absolutely love that magic Graph... Where did you find it? Or did you make it yourself? And yeah I think that is all I have to say. If you need any help, just message me or tag me or something. I am glad to help new rp'ers out :P