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State Of Bedlam, is it alright for some of those who believe the superstition of her to attempt to summon her? Obviously she wouldn't appear, but she would be able to hear them/sense the location.
That's fine as long as you RP the reason she can sense this.
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Raimei, add daylight and garlic to affliction weaknesses. Add "her body is vulnerable to attack while she is out of her body as a poltergeist" to weaknesses. Please specify what you mean by "those of a holy manner." That could mean several different things. You added 200 points instead of 100, so you have 600 points total out of 500. When you fix that,
Accepted.
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Raitoningu, please explain the marionette strings a bit more. The blades of spectral energy are fine. Add more to weaknesses. Put the location of your phylactery and what object your phylactery is somewhere in your bio.
To both of you "Pet: Raimei" and "Friends: Raitionogu" is just a joke and won't have any bearing on the RP, right?
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Tanstin,
Accepted.
@N0VA™, is he a lich? That goes under affliction if he is. Just "knowledge" isn't a skill. Specific kinds of knowledge are. Like
these. Describe your weapons. I never said anything about demons existing in this setting. Paladin is not an affliction weakness. You may keep his weaknesses a secret if you drop plenty of hints in the the roleplay. PM me what his weaknesses are. Keep in mind that if he's too cruel, Moryveil and the Black College will turn against him. They may be necromancers, but they're still mostly good guys.
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Yukari455, sorry I confused you! :) Necromancer is not an affliction. You can leave affliction blank or put "None," because it does not look like your character has an affliction. You don't have to use the example skills like "Gourmet cooking" and "rock climbing" in your character. You get to come up with your own skills! You may leave affliction weaknesses blank or put "N/A" (meaning "Not applicable") because you do not have an affliction. Other than that, looks good.