I've always been curious as to what a writing excerpt with the 'gore' content rating would be. How do you describe the high quantity of blood and/or physical injury? How do you make it descriptive? I would love to see some examples of writing excerpts containing well-thought out depictions of gore! The thing is, I don't mind it, but I've never actually written gore before so I'm not exactly sure on how it would be depicted in writing. An extensive PM discussion would be even more wonderful aside from the writing excerpts! I want to write gore!
I'm not a big splatterfan either, but I love me some horror! I think describing gore is the same as describing anything, so you need to decide a few things first
- Am I going for gross-out or scary?
- Do I want it realistic or over-the-top splatter?
- How should the reader feel about the person/thing which just got ripped up? Sorry for them? Scared by them? A little satisfied?
What's a good idea and what's not really depends a lot on these things. I find if you're going for gross-out, you should think of things that are well, gross, and try to draw parallels. Rotten things are gross, so you may say that the smell of the corpse in the room was like rotting meat (bonus points for tying the idea of a corpse to something edible - eewwww!!) Or think of how you'd describe the feel, texture, smell, sight, etc of gross things like vomit, pus, open sores, etc.
I think that whatever tone you're going for, you should avoid being clinical. You're painting a picture, not writing a medical textbook! don't say they had a complete fracture of the femur, say their leg had been cracked like a toothpick, and describe what it looked like. Is the bone poking out? What impressions does that make? Is there a lot of blood? What's it on? Is it still flowing, dripping, or spurting?
Oh, and if you're going for scary, same principles as the gross things. Scary scenes, for me personally, are action-based. Use your active and powerful verbs to your advantage! Don't say the room stank, say that the smell rushed at the protagonist's face as soon as they opened the door. 'rushed' is an action word, and gives the image of the character being assaulted by the smell. Think of things commonly associated with fear and tie them in. What's scary for different people is going to be as varied as what's gross for different people, but you can usually find a few mainstays.
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