@Silvir
Miss Forge looks good! One minor amendment I will note is that, being a Dwarf, her father could not have enchanted her necklace, as Dwarves are not capable of performing magic. That won't stop me accepting the character though. Just make sure to edit this minor detail, and it would also be good if you could amend the formatting of the sheet, too. Look for errors using the BB Code Editor as I've explained in previous posts; deleting excess code at points where the formatting 'splits' usually fixes the problem.
Adrianna is accepted, welcome aboard!
@Navi Jay
Feyre is coming along nicely! I still think the backstory is lacking, however, but it's nothing to worry about. I know you can do it! I think there's just a misunderstanding in what I need from you; it doesn't have to be long or wordy. Just look at Blacksam's sheet, his backstory is rather succinct and in its current form skips large portions of his life. But what it does show me is major events that have caused the character to become who he is, to act how he does.
I know that insisting on a solid backstory must sounds petty of me, so allow me to explain why I consider it to be the single most important element of a character sheet: I want
real characters, which is incredibly difficult in a fantasy setting. The way I ensure this is by insisting that I only accept characters whom I believe. Perhaps it is because I'm a filmmaker in real-life, and I tire of seeing non-believable characters on the big screen; but the motives are ultimately irrelevant.
So far, I've seen your characters life from before she was conceived(!) up to age 6, but I still don't know a great deal about her. What I'm saying is, if we had a full account of Feyre's life, I think most of the backstory you've written currently could be omitted and it wouldn't make much difference. I need to know her roots, and the most important, character-defining moments of her life. It doesn't need to be long; it just needs to get the job done. Because as much as I want you in the roleplay, I can't accept Feyre until I know in my heart that I 'believe' her!
Hope this makes sense. The IC isn't going live until the weekend, so you still have time to nail the backstory. I have every faith you'll manage!
@Blacksam
Faen is accepted! I can't wait to watch this famed and well-respected hero unravel before our party's eyes, and to watch as he inevitably tries to find some sort of redemption. It might have taken you
absolutely forever to get out of your system, but I can tell that you've put a lot of thought into it. Welcome aboard!