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Tegan
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Asmo and I are pitching this idea to an indie comics publisher tomorrow. Constructive feedback would be greatly appreciated because we are crippled pee pee pants babies. Not lookin' for compliments. We're looking for nitpicks and complaints. GIVE US THE BUSINESS.
Some of you might recognize this as the horrible spawn of a onexone we did a few years back.
THE PITCH
If Loren Bouchard and Doc Hammer submitted a screenplay to Pixar, only to have it rejected outright, this would be the graphic novel they publish to settle their gambling debts.
POWERS THAT BE, a global body for the registration and integration of superhuman citizens. For fifty years the P.T.B. has assigned heroes to Threat-Rated areas across the globe. But the agency has a second, less publicized role: the rehousing of displaced sidekicks and orphaned minions.
In the Cornish town of Penkos, rated 0.09 on the Threat Scale, a handful of disgraced former sidekicks have been placed in the care of a veteran super hero, Chip Hupper. Chip is the leader of the Paper Tigers team, once a legend, now a joke. Their budget allocation is so miniscule that the Paper Tigers must run a local pub to make ends meet.
This is a story about failure, redemption and the plight of service industry workers.
THE CAST:
Chip Hupper: an indestructible alien with super strength from the Silver Age of heroes.
Levity Cho: a waitress with ADHD who can manipulate gravity.
Gribble: a racist, junkie rabbit on the hunt for the AntiChrist.
Xerxthu, Render of Souls: a bartending necromancer from the Seventh Circle.
Gordon: a P.T.B. bureaucrat investigating the numerous health and safety violations and sexual harassment complaints filed against the Paper Tigers.
@unanun @DotCom @Jack Shade @Grumpy @fatalrendezvous @Kooriryu @CoffeeCake @Xnijmai @Ozzie Chanter @Vay @Zen @Diana
Some of you might recognize this as the horrible spawn of a onexone we did a few years back.
THE PITCH
If Loren Bouchard and Doc Hammer submitted a screenplay to Pixar, only to have it rejected outright, this would be the graphic novel they publish to settle their gambling debts.
POWERS THAT BE, a global body for the registration and integration of superhuman citizens. For fifty years the P.T.B. has assigned heroes to Threat-Rated areas across the globe. But the agency has a second, less publicized role: the rehousing of displaced sidekicks and orphaned minions.
In the Cornish town of Penkos, rated 0.09 on the Threat Scale, a handful of disgraced former sidekicks have been placed in the care of a veteran super hero, Chip Hupper. Chip is the leader of the Paper Tigers team, once a legend, now a joke. Their budget allocation is so miniscule that the Paper Tigers must run a local pub to make ends meet.
This is a story about failure, redemption and the plight of service industry workers.
THE CAST:
Chip Hupper: an indestructible alien with super strength from the Silver Age of heroes.
Levity Cho: a waitress with ADHD who can manipulate gravity.
Gribble: a racist, junkie rabbit on the hunt for the AntiChrist.
Xerxthu, Render of Souls: a bartending necromancer from the Seventh Circle.
Gordon: a P.T.B. bureaucrat investigating the numerous health and safety violations and sexual harassment complaints filed against the Paper Tigers.
@unanun @DotCom @Jack Shade @Grumpy @fatalrendezvous @Kooriryu @CoffeeCake @Xnijmai @Ozzie Chanter @Vay @Zen @Diana
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