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Wolfsbane706
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Your skeleton needs an overhaul. For one, it needs a major proofread, for two, it needs to be cleaned up for readability, and for three, while I'll accept teamwork as something to be improved, Sam's other skills strike me as too much for the setting.https://s-media-cache-ak0.pinimg.com/236x/78/e7/12/78e7126f4f7596a7ff241479b0386022.jpg
What's your name? Sam leone
How old are you? 19
How tall are you? 6'2
How much do you weigh? 205
What are you coming to the camp for (hockey or figure skating)? Hockey
How much skill do you have in the sport? I'm amazing
What are you like as a person (Their personality)? Sam is generally kind and caring until he steps onto the ice, then he becomes very aggressive with a short temper.
Tell me about your past. Sam came from a small town in northern michigan, where he started his career in hockey. At the age of 15 he became the youngest high school mvp in Michigan. After high school he was given a scholarship to Michigan state college for hockey, but here is where he started having problems. He had started fighting with his teammates believing he was a one man team. The coach did not like this and sent him before hoping he could possibly learn how to calm down on the ice or he may lose his scholarship.
Anything else I should know (Stuff that probably wouldn't fit anywhere else)?
She's hilarious, but she seems to have misunderstood the "What are you like as a person" question. Fix that up and we're good.My character is up and this is generally the standard that Wolf is looking for. Think of it as roleplaying and this as an interview in 1st person. Image will come tomorrow.
Oh and I'm Co-GM. So any queries or issues, feel free to PM or ask me here. :) No, you can't have super fun time with professor genki.
Any sheets that are hard to read will be rejected.
Will do tomorrow if i don't get round to fixing it today.She's hilarious, but she seems to have misunderstood the "What are you like as a person" question. Fix that up and we're good.
Sometime today or tomorrow. Depends if I'm going somewhere or not@Shayla, and @MusicalMegLove, when will your profiles be going up? As well, @GrieveWriter and @beautie need to post or have their reserved slots passed on to someone else.
You can. I just won't review it til you're done.@The Dovah does that mean I can't post a Work in Progress?
Ok that had me worried because it takes me a while to come up with personalities and back stories for my characters. And I don't want to lose everything else that I've gotten done because of thatYou can. I just won't review it til you're done.
Relax. You'll be fine.Ok that had me worried because it takes me a while to come up with personalities and back stories for my characters. And I don't want to lose everything else that I've gotten done because of that
Ok thanks I just putt what I had now I'll go see what I can do for his personalityRelax. You'll be fine.
Just put a notice about it being work in progress. :)You can. I just won't review it til you're done.