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Would you be okay with this RP having a heavy tie to collab posts through Google Docs?

  • Maybe. I am fine if others use it, but I won't if I will not penalized for not using it.

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  • Maybe. Google Docs does not work for me, but I am fine if others use it still.

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  • No! But I would be open to some other platform for collabs.

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Changes have been made! Dropped the enhanced strength for the self buff since I plan on actually building off of that.
 
Changes have been made! Dropped the enhanced strength for the self buff since I plan on actually building off of that.
That was fast. You're good. Will be updating the OP to include accepted characters which now includes yours.
 
That was fast. You're good. Will be updating the OP to include accepted characters which now includes yours.
Cool. Just clarified what he can cleave through when his claws are "charged" as well.
 
Prague Spring. +10 points
I'm glad that you enjoyed the reference to the Prague Spring.

As we all know, it's not a party if it's not a communist party.

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"assailed by strange images and whispered voices that spoke of the arcane..." easy to work as either legitimate or delusions!
Indeed, it seemed like an interesting angle and it's easy to adapt to your GMness.

Leader / Regulator : Another classic combination.

Manifestation stacks itself up on itself, golems are cool, obvious weakness in requiring material present to do it, guessing wreckage will be the best use for this.

The trepidation of testing the empowerment on others is an interesting touch. Gives me room to decide the results of that as well!
Again many thanks, I felt it made sense for Oto to be more than a little uncertain about the safety of imbuing people left and right with arcane magic. *cue dramatic and ominous music*

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Thanks! Your amusing review was well worth the short wait. :)
 
Had an opportunity to make a pun name for the Kuakilla University, or its mascot or sport team. Missed it. -10 points
Godammit you're right ;-; G-go...Kuakilla...Koalas?

"Crawl! Climb! Claw to the top! When Koalas come around, the competition drops!"

Oh god why
Betty and Sarah; Lesbians? +10
WHO TOLD YOU, I'LL END- I mean, whatever gave you that idea?~

Both are still good. Not in love but still like them! Hopefully you do too so I don't have to come back and review them again, ERIMEAN nothing.
No worries xD I like 'em, the creative possibilities of the LSD sweat were good, but I wasn't completely sold. So burning silly putty bullets came to mind lol
 
Well then, I believe I messed up my Character sheet some more but I have changed Infiltrator to Warrior for what Im planning to do with her. And Also Im not surprised if Serenity got scarred during the Blast Event really, most likely got some neat wounds on her that will scar.
 
Well then, I believe I messed up my Character sheet some more but I have changed Infiltrator to Warrior for what Im planning to do with her. And Also Im not surprised if Serenity got scarred during the Blast Event really, most likely got some neat wounds on her that will scar.
Wait, your sheet is changed. Was this you telling me you had done your edits and wanted me to check it out again?

Also I had a sudden realization and looked up gambling and employment laws in Illinois. If you're going to be working at the Casino, it seems you need to be at least 21, even if just cleaning up or working as a server.
 
Wait, your sheet is changed. Was this you telling me you had done your edits and wanted me to check it out again?

Also I had a sudden realization and looked up gambling and employment laws in Illinois. If you're going to be working at the Casino, it seems you need to be at least 21, even if just cleaning up or working as a server.
Doe... I'll just change it to a nice Motel close to a casino... xD But yeah after doing that can you check my CS again for my Power, not sure if you will like it or not (probably not) and i want to see your... reaction :D
 
Thanks for accepting me, Elly. I called Kuakilla a town because Charlotte's a bit of a snot about that sort of thing, but I can gladly give it a more proper designation.

And I voted in yer poll.
 
Doe... I'll just change it to a nice Motel close to a casino... xD But yeah after doing that can you check my CS again for my Power, not sure if you will like it or not (probably not) and i want to see your... reaction :D
Well there's like some typos still in it, but the bulk of things looks good now, except one thing that I would add to your Hunter thing.

Because Silver has less sensory information to process, she processes it faster. So when moving fast, she's able to adapt to her environment fast as well. Fewer crashes into things this way.

Or something along those lines. As is, you're actually a bit too weak where you are, but throw that in and you should be good.
 
Well there's like some typos still in it, but the bulk of things looks good now, except one thing that I would add to your Hunter thing.

Because Silver has less sensory information to process, she processes it faster. So when moving fast, she's able to adapt to her environment fast as well. Fewer crashes into things this way.

Or something along those lines. As is, you're actually a bit too weak where you are, but throw that in and you should be good.
Hmmm okay dokie, On it! Besides I'll do better latter in the Roleplay when Im a supahfast! But when I start to get empowerments its going to be tricky to blanace the two out, cause i can see the importance of my blindsight during a combat scenario.
 
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Voted!~

"Finally have a good relationship with my family! Would be a shame if they all-- oh dammit."
This. This is Annalicia spot on. cx

The Infiltrator Manifestation is... hrm...

I've written on it twice now, deleting it both after I realized I was looking at it wrong. First it was okay, but then I was like 'wait, this feels more like a first level Tanker than Infiltrator' because it feels more 'avoid damage' than 'avoid detection'. BUT then I reread it and it is definitely 'move through things' and that's... acceptable. I'd say you can't use it yet to avoid attacks, however. Not yet, with an Empowerment, maybe!
I definitely see where her abilities can come off as 'avoiding damage', but I'm glad you understood where I was going with her! I'll be sure to play this smartly, seeing as it'd be pretty easy to mix her power up with the Tanker Class. I have a more thought out idea on how her powers work, but I'm positive it'll only add more confusion. But, back to the point--Anna can't avoid attacks! Got it! (:

That said, while you don't have to change this, a comment. I'd prefer that instead of having the ability to go longer but the danger of doing it at start, that you'd be unable to do the longer durations. Specially as you already have the 'hold your breath' thing! I feel that just having that be a limitation for now would be better. As is, it's still... fine.
A fault on my part since I should have worded it better, but by extended use I meant more as Anna using her powers too often, or excessively that it can begin to harm her. So by activating her power on and off throughout the day she'll eventually become worn out, but I understand where your coming from for the limitations! I'll edit that right now.~

STATUS: Good! Welcome aboard.
Awesome! I can't wait for things to get started! n u n
 
Speaking of things going "supah" fast, I've always wondered what happens when a quick superhero takes copious amounts of amphetamines...
 
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