When writing an emote, try and write more then just one or two sentences, Ash. ^^ Like; what do they do and how do they react to a certain answer or statement or something that's happening, so that it's more then just a short post. :) And also so a person gets a better view of how the character perhaps is and of how he/she reacts to certain approaches.
Like, instead of just; "Your mother, what happened to her?" You can elaborate it to: "Your mother, what happened to her?" Ash asked as he looked at Morywin, while he wanted answers, he was not sure if he should press on the subject or leave it.
And then if he does something and such. :) And instead of posting several posts after one another, you can choose "Edit" at the bottom of your post if you realize something that you wanted to add before getting a response from another poster. So for example, instead of writing; Post: "I'm sorry, it was not my intention."
Post: "He turned towards [Insert name] "And I apologize to you as well." "
You could edit it so it said: "I'm sorry, it was not my intention." He said as he looked at [Insert name] before he turned towards [Insert name]. "And I apologize to you as well."
Just some small hints and tips that might be useful! :)
